Mercy Breeze


You emerge from battle, Scarred.

face obscured by your own tears,

Tired, Broken, bleeding 

You just  defeated your own worst fears.

As you recount the battle’s blows.

Across the lands, a cool merciful breeze flows.

Saying someone up in heaven, already knows.


Written 26/06/09 while experiencing gods little mercies 🙂


4 thoughts on “Mercy Breeze

  1. Paavani says:

    thats a nice one!

  2. pradster says:

    Thanks so much Paavani, Ricercar!

  3. a a says:

    one word for the last two lines ethereal
    and I like the pic and the title too.
    how long does it take to write?
    a thought – scribble
    or a thought – ponder- write – rewrite

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